Seriously, I loved this fic. It was moving and funny and a bit hot at the same time. I really like the way there were no drama and big, confusing feelings included – it was just a moment between these two, full of curiosity and growing physical attraction. A sequel? Pleaaaseee?
I also love the way you used language here. English is not my native and I can't always tell poor writing from good writing, but I definitely can tell great writing from writing in general. Keep up the awesome work! *is off to read your other fics*
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Seriously, I loved this fic. It was moving and funny and a bit hot at the same time. I really like the way there were no drama and big, confusing feelings included – it was just a moment between these two, full of curiosity and growing physical attraction. A sequel? Pleaaaseee?
I also love the way you used language here. English is not my native and I can't always tell poor writing from good writing, but I definitely can tell great writing from writing in general. Keep up the awesome work! *is off to read your other fics*