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Lady Drace ([personal profile] ladydrace) wrote2010-01-06 05:19 pm

Another smutty ficlet: Becoming a Better Man.

I promised I'd post this. Personally I find it kinda OOC, but it's smut, so I'm sure there are people who would read it anyway.

Title: Becoming a Better Man. (Crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] merlinxarthur  and [livejournal.com profile] kinkme_merlin .)
Written for [livejournal.com profile] kinkme_merlin #7 for the prompt: Arthur starts noticing a pattern - whenever he does something particularly noble or brave, Merlin is a lot more horny than usual.
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 932
Characters/pairings: Merlin/Arthur
Summary: Merlin makes Arthur a better man. The naughty way.
Notes/Warnings: Smut! Not beta'd.
Disclaimer: I don't own anything at all and I certainly don't make any money from writing this.


The first time it happened, Arthur didn't think anything of it. He had spared the life of yet another would-be assasain, trying to kill Uther's son, as the King had killed his own for some magic transgression or other. Arthur had easily deflected the blade, and since it had only been him and Merlin to witness it, Arthur had simply taken the man's blade, pressed a few coins into his hand (which was probably of more value than he had ever owned in his entire life) and told him to leave Camelot and create himself a new life elsewhere. He had hardly closed the door to his chambers behind them, before Merlin was all over him and fantastic things happened right there by the door.

The second time didn't ring any bells with Arthur either. Saving a little girl from being trampled by a runaway pair of horses did get his heart racing on its own, so he was more than willing for the earth-shattering shag they had soon after in the armory, where anyone could have caught them, and Arthur truly didn't care.

Third time, Arthur started noticing. He had settled a dispute between two farmers over some land by giving one of them some livestock from Camelot's own stables, as compensation for the land the other farmer claimed rights to. As the farmers went away smiling, Arthur glanced up to find Merlin staring at him with very heated eyes and his legs seemed to shake a little beneath him. Never one to refuse Merlin's advances when there was any opportunity to accept them, Arthur quickly excused himself from the councillors and pulled Merlin out of the courtroom by the elbow.

He didn't go very far, but settled for a small room down the hall, filled with various cleaning implements and some general mess. There was no lock on the door, but that was the last thing on Arthur's mind. As soon as the door was closed, Merlin was kissing him hard enough to bruise and already digging his hand into Arthur's breeches.

Arthur broke the kiss and pushed Merlin away to look at him. Merlin looked like a puppy died, which made Arthur smirk. “Eager, Merlin?”

Merlin hardly seemed to realize what Arthur was saying, but merely interpreted his words as permission to continue. Arthur pulled him off with some effort, before he got too far and shook him by the shoulders, to make sure he had his attention. “So. You liked that?”

Nodding, Merlin looked as if he didn't trust himself to speak. This suited Arthur nicely. He didn't need Merlin's arguing or babbling to disturb a train a thought that was frankly threatening to melt his brain from pure lust. “What was it, Merlin? My generosity? My fairness? Or just my stunningly good looks?”

A shrug made Arthur's hands slide down Merlin's shoulders, so he let them continue until he held Merlin's hands, pressing them between his own, waiting for an answer. Blushing wildly, Merlin swallowed and swallowed, making his adam's apple dance, before he finally croaked out: “It's just... you were so... noble.” The last word gushed out as a heavy sigh and Merlin took a testing step forward, obviously hoping to continue his earlier activity.

Arthur beat him to it, and crushed their lips together, before grinding groin against groin. Merlin whined and gasped, making Arthur burn inside and pull at Merlin's clothes. Then he reconsidered and pushed Merlin down on his knees, where he wasted no time in undoing Arthur's laces and swallowing right down. Arthur groaned and rested his hands loosely in Merlin's hair, as he obviously needed very little encouragement. Arthur couldn't help but test his newfound edge, though. So gathering his wits with extreme effort, he said with stuttering breath: “What if I told you, that I let Sir Raine stay home from patrol, because his sister is ill?”

Merlin made a little whimpering sound in his throat and increased the suction to a point where Arthur could have sworn his mind was being pulled out through his groin. Something so good surely shouldn't go to waste, so he hastily pulled more noble acts out of his brain, before the rest of it descended permanently.

“I... I bought a whole cart of bad cabbage from a poor farmer, who couldn't sell it to anyone else. I even paid him double.” Merlin's hand shot down to undo his own breeches and he whined on every exhale through his nose. “I sent soldiers to help a village outside our borders, because they were plagued by bandits.”

The noises became even more pitiful, and Arthur could feel how Merlin was frantically touching himself, so he didn't chance a look down. It would undo him on the spot, and he really wanted Merlin along with him. So he thought up one more act of good, that- if he was right about a few things- should do the trick.

“Last year... before you came to Camelot... There was a sorcerer in the dungeons, set for execution. He was a healer. Never harmed anyone. I helped him escape and told my father he was dead.” Merlin made a strangled noise, and Arthur looked down just in time to see his boots splattered with spurts of white in quick succession and Merlin's hollowed cheeks around his cock, pulling a brain-melting climax out of him.

Years later, people said that Merlin inspired Arthur to become a better king. And they were right. With inspiration like that, who wouldn't strive to be better?

End.

[identity profile] archaeologist-d.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 04:41 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL. Well that's one way of getting Arthur to be a better king. Very cute.

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for reading. :o)
ext_19722: lanning (Merlin color A/M)

[identity profile] silkmoth101.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 04:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Hahahahahahahahahaha! Awesome! What a great way to guide the Once and Future King! Just great!

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, if you had amazing sex every time you did good, wouldn't you get far in the world too? I think I would... guh.

[identity profile] twisting-fate9.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
OH LORD.
*fans self*

glad to know us fangirls aren't the only ones who enjoy noble!arthur, eh Merlin?

;]

loved it.

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh yes, let's all enjoy Arthur as much as possible. And Merlin. Mmmmm.

Thanks!

[identity profile] superfletch.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 04:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmmm noble!Arthur.... Hot indeed. ;)

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Noble!Arthur is hot by definition. Thanks!

[identity profile] openmoments.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:09 pm (UTC)(link)
AHAHAHA. That would make ANYONE be a better king. very nice. =D

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks!
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[personal profile] thelibraniniquity 2010-01-06 05:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Merlin's methods of positive reinforcement clearly were very effective. LOL! Very nice, and not too OOC at all, I don't think :)
ext_7408: (Merlin/Arthur - destiny)

[identity profile] yavannauk.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee, now there's an incentive program for you!! *g*

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
*nods* Better than all those life coaches.

[identity profile] the-muppet.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 05:59 pm (UTC)(link)
That was great!

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 06:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe, thanks.

[identity profile] phys-nut.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 06:25 pm (UTC)(link)
guh...omg i don't know whether to melt or laugh, it was totally hot and sweet and wonderful!

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:50 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe, thanks!

[identity profile] leathlin.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 06:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay,now I want to do something noble just BECAUSE I'M THAT NICE!

Seriously,this was hot! Such a way to guide Arthur into great future:D

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Hey, I'd do something noble too, if it meant that Merlin would do Fantastic Things [tm] to me. Rawr.

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[identity profile] leathlin.livejournal.com - 2010-01-06 22:47 (UTC) - Expand

[identity profile] adeina-rhyddha.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 06:48 pm (UTC)(link)
This...this happens every time Arthur is noble. Y'know, canon.
I have decided. Just now. Really.
Because...it makes me happy to imagine it, what can I say? x3

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Makes me very happy too. *drool*
scribblemoose: image of moose with pen and paper (merlin: merlinxarthur soft)

[personal profile] scribblemoose 2010-01-06 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Positive reinforcement is a wonderful thing!

Lovely fic, thank you. :)

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
It is! Better than any life coach or such nonsense!

Thank you!

[identity profile] merkuria.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 07:01 pm (UTC)(link)
That is a very logical explanation of Arthur's future greatness. And a whole lot of fun reading :)

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Makes perfect sense. *nods*

Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] nyxelestia.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 07:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Well this certainly explains quite a bit. ;) Legend!Canon! ^_^

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:53 pm (UTC)(link)
It does, doesn't it? :oP

Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] accioslash.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
With inspiration like that, who wouldn't strive to be better?


Hahahahaha! This absolutely made my day. ;D Somehow I don't think this version made it into the history books. ♥

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, if you ask me, that whole period suffered from a severe lack of porn.

Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] et-cetera55.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol! This is so what is going to happen!

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 09:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Would be awefully nice... but I think I'm too much of a disbeliever to see it happening. *sigh*

[identity profile] becsx.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 10:35 pm (UTC)(link)
Well that's certainly one way to get Arthur to be a great King!!
Amazing! *brain explodes*

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 04:39 am (UTC)(link)
*scoops up brain remains and pours back into skull* Here ya go. Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] sparkysluvchild.livejournal.com 2010-01-06 11:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Hot, hot, hot! *melts*
Hehe, I loved the 'merlin inspired him to be a better king' bit. Cute! So cute!

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 04:41 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Glad you liked!
slightlytookish: John and Gale looking at each other against a blue background (Merlin: Arthur & Merlin - Battlements)

[personal profile] slightlytookish 2010-01-07 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! It's great to know the truth about how Merlin inspired Arthur ;) I love that Arthur figured it out and then had to go and brag about every noble thing he'd done :D

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
That's because Arthur isn't stupid... all the time...

Thank you!

[identity profile] amedox.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 01:30 am (UTC)(link)
Hahaha! Well, that is quite the incentive. ;D I liked this a lot!

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Hehe, thanks!

[identity profile] o-deanna.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Haha, very appropriate seeing as I'm trying to train my puppy with rewards right now (although, y'know, more food based and less sexy - although he is humping me rather a lot...maybe he likes MY good deeds? XD)

So gathering his wits with extreme effort, he said with stuttering breath: “What if I told you, that I let Sir Raine stay home from patrol, because his sister is ill?” - Hahaha, my favourite bit. Excellent.

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 08:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Arthur catching on is always one of my favorite moments. :oP Thank you!

[identity profile] mel-kaine.livejournal.com 2010-01-07 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
so clever and funny...<3
awwww I love little infatueted!Merlin

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-08 11:49 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Glad you like!!

Hahahaha

[identity profile] de-tensai.livejournal.com 2010-01-08 01:48 pm (UTC)(link)
It's great that Arthur's trying very hard to fulfill Merlin's biggest turn-on XD

Re: Hahahaha

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-09 09:07 am (UTC)(link)
Considering the payoff, can you blame him? :oP Thanks for reading!

[identity profile] littleboots1.livejournal.com 2010-01-08 01:59 pm (UTC)(link)
who knew talking so nobly could be perceived as dirty talk...loved it!

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-09 09:07 am (UTC)(link)
I guess even dirty talk is in the eye... uh... ear of the beholder. :oP

Thanks!
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[identity profile] thecheekydragon.livejournal.com 2010-01-08 09:22 pm (UTC)(link)
i'm always up for some good smutty fic and this one was fantastically satisfying *wink*

like the funny in it - always a turn on with those boys

~ tcd

[identity profile] lady-drace.livejournal.com 2010-01-09 09:08 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

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