I can tell you planned on this being a longer fic. The beginning does feel a bit rushed. I want to know more about the setup of their relationship. I love Nirra's discovery and Julian spotting her. I also liked the little details of her figuring things out and knowing that her friend would sense that something happened.
“I don't recall telling you to get dressed, my dear.” lol. No worries, Garak. Julian eats at warp speed. Very fun overall!
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Date: 2008-12-30 10:40 pm (UTC)I can tell you planned on this being a longer fic. The beginning does feel a bit rushed. I want to know more about the setup of their relationship. I love Nirra's discovery and Julian spotting her. I also liked the little details of her figuring things out and knowing that her friend would sense that something happened.
“I don't recall telling you to get dressed, my dear.” lol. No worries, Garak. Julian eats at warp speed. Very fun overall!